Magical night and a majestic moon,
The stars arrayed to scintillate soon.
My stark soul, awaits a glimpse of you;
And aching heart hopes the spirits, renew.
Like the oceans binding the waves, agile;
My eyes behold your sunshine smile.
When bouts of pain, my eyes betray to confine;
To your allaying grace, I taciturnly entwine.
Doomed are my lips, for I cannot kiss your feet;
Sanctified are my dreams, in which you e’er meet.
Although the fondness of your breath is poles apart;
Its fragrance steeped in my soul, can ne’er depart.
Come up, my dearest mother, in placid paces,
And lodge in my dark voids and light up all spaces.
Ensure, the night will not pull round for long;
So hush me down quickly, with your soulful song.
Short-winded, I am, for the divine love of you;
The altruistic and purest, so undying and so true.
Breathe softly in me, your fervid and eonian love;
Nourish with tenderness, this petite seed, you sow.
Heart touching words i read but sorry read late…
You are good plyer of words…
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Thank you very much for the appreciation, Tahir. No worries…I’m happy that you liked it. Stay Blessed, dear friend.
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what a beautifully magical poem, can sense the sincere emotion and longing behind your stunning metaphors xx
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Thank you ever so much PLU (Peaceloveanunity). This poem is close to my heart…dedicated to my mother. Being countries away from my mother…was longing for her love. Was crying rivers while penning that beautiful poem….the emotions were fresh and straight from the heart. I still go tear eyed reading it.
Thanks for liking it….Gratitude!
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you dont need to thank me BE 😛 continue writing amazing words out the depth of your heart x
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You are too thoughtful and kind. “BE”..love this truncated version of my pseudonym.
Stay Smiling! 🙂
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its so filled with emotions that even am crying at this moment reading it.. you are a gem 🙂
am sharing my yelling when i miss her when am far on my blog…please have a look when you could
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Such is the love of my beautiful goddess…my mother. I miss her every single second. Will definitely read through your emotional pain… Find me soon to wipe your tear….
Smile Please..:)
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I wonder, how your thoughts resembles mine, even for mother…for she is the best gift in my life, and my best friend indeed..i won’t go for any exam any interview without watching her face, and actually so home-sick that i can’t stay away from her, not more that a fortnight..
happy to see reflections of my feelings in your words too 🙂
you make me smile
you too smile ❤ 🙂
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Oh sweetie…moms are so sweet that none can escape from this eternal addiction. I was never away from my mother….but today I am countries away from her for the very very first time in life. I am not home-sick but definitely a mother-sick. You make me smile but you make me cry too by reminding the missing and longing.
But still….smiling. Having a smile that hides thousands of tears.
Take care and stay blessed. 🙂
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You make me think, if you are some lost twin of mine?
i agree…no one can be sweeter than moms.
and though you be far, but never away from her care..her prayers..her thoughts ❤
so a cheers to our moms… 🙂 wishing them good health and happiness and a long life…
love to our mothers..
you too, stay blessed and take care 🙂
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Would love to be a twin soul..he he.
Yes..its the same heart that breathes different air… in different countries…hence my mom is with me and I am with her. My prayers for both the mothers.. and all the mothers. May all the mothers stay happy and healthy all their lives.
I will definitely stay blessed…
Peace to you. :).
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peace to all fellow mates 🙂
and prayers for their mothers 🙂
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I fondly join…:)
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Hi i am a south indian.Thanks for the likes and after reading your poems i understood to become a very good writer following your blog is gonna help me.
Thank you so much for the like and i know that poem is nothing compared to yours 🙂
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It is all my pleasure reading your haikus and other poems. You have a unique style and your thoughts take us into whole new world. Do not you say that yours is nothing comparatively. First off , there is no comparison. WE all are here to express and we express differently because we have our own individual thoughts. I am happy that you find my blog lil inspiring. I am humbled. Lets encourage each other and draw a mutual inspiration. Keep expressing and keep writing. I would read your blog in detail, very soon. Stay Blessed! 🙂
PS What is your name? I guess Sherinsk is your pseudonym.
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First of all please don’t think i am a writer and all.when i started off blogging my main idea was to get some friends.you know everybody is different so all of them did not liked me asking things like where do they live etc.It was all stories i see around in my neighborhood i posted in my earlier days.Then since i am a crazy movie lover sometimes movie scenes also.But haikus and poems i just tried after seeing some beautiful writings in others blog.
Now i know that to express more in less words is the real art.By the way what is your name?where do you live and i believe you are a lady 🙂
Your mother is in India?where?
My name is sherin and once again thank you for being nice with me.God Bless 🙂
I have some gifts for you if you don’t mind.
http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/10/04/haiku-6/
http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/09/11/alone/
http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/07/15/journey/
http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/06/27/times/
http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/a-picture/
http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/06/18/haiku-little/
http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/06/18/the-lying-leaves/
http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/06/12/haiku/
http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/06/06/dancing-in-the-rain/
To be frank these are all the good ones i wrote.
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I have read some of your haikus and they are beautifully written. My name is Reva. I honestly do not like discussing much details about my private life. Hope you do not mind me being little reserved. I will definitely go through the links. Thanks for sharing your wonderful works. Stay smiling! 🙂
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Sorry riva i just asked.No problem.so you are not gonna like movie songs,scenes or other things or videos i post.well,good poems and haikus are hard to write.Right now everything is blank inside my head.Anyways i will try for some good poems and haikus.
Thank you and when free time comes read the above links.i believe you are gonna enjoy all those.God Bless 🙂
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Sure! I would definitely read your poems and haikus. Regarding movies and all….there would be a language barrier for me. I can speak, English, Hindi, Marathi. Can understand, kanada, telugu, tamil, bengali, gujaratia nd punjabi to a lil extent……Malayalam is okay kind to fairly understand. Moreover, I hardly watch movies. But I will definitely take out time to go through your blog.
Every one has a unique taste… and I am such. Hope you understand. I saved those links you have given me. I will read them one by one.
Thank you for understanding. Stay Blessed!
Reva.
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Such a luminous, elegant ode, Reva. Your mother must be so deeply touched. Peace and hugs to you, my eloquent friend. xo
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Gratitude and Love, dear. I’m glad you liked it. She is my God. I just adore her. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your beautiful wishes. You are too kind. Lovely and warm hugs to you too. Stay beautiful and blessed. 🙂
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One lovely blog award is waiting for you here: http://followingthegoldenquill.wordpress.com/2014/10/05/one-lovely-blog-award/
Best wishes.
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Thank you, Vik. I would do my best to post at the earliest.
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Just have some fun.
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Sure. 🙂
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Sunny days and dreamy nights
I wish upon you to come…
To discover the beautiful sights
And posts them to the wordpress for me to read some…
🙂
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Awesome! Thank you so much. Noting this in my little diary. Would treasure ……………someone amazing has written this for me.
Thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. 🙂
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Just wishing you be well and happy. 🙂
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I will… Thank you, Vik. 🙂
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🙂
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Awwwww, how far are you from your mom? I also am very far from my mom. I have to pay around $1,500 and two to three airplanes to be able to see mine. Only every 2 years or so do I ever get the opportunity. It’s beautiful how you’ve written this heart-felt poem to her.
🙂
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Thank you Staci, for the concern. I stay in London and my mom is in India. So you can imagine………..I have no other family than her. Lost my father 11 yrs ago. This is for the first time I am away from my mom. Just feel like crying every day. And hope to meet her every night in my dreams.
So sad to hear about your path leading to your mom. It is always painful to live away from a mother……………such powerful is her love. I dont know what is in that healing touch………….that makes a dying spirit come alive. May you meet your lovely mother very soon and very often. Prayers Assured!
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Oh my goodness. I’m so sorry. You sound like you’re very homesick.
I’ve been far from my mom for many years now. I think about 20. For the first seven years I was still in the same country (Canada). Then I was in Asia for a year. Then back living with her for a year. Now in Brazil for 12 years. Sooooo, I’m used it, and Skype helps. She’s coming to visit in February – YEAH!
Keep your chin up sweetie. I’ll say a prayer for you.
🙂
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I am just surprised to hear this………..20 years is a life time.Happy to know she would be with you soon.
I just cannot bear such prolonged separation and I am not used to it. Yes, Skype helps but still……………my heart will never be convinced. I miss her real presence.
Thank you Staci for your time and kindness. I am little relieved knowing a piece of your life. I should not think, I am the only one. There are plenty of my kind sailing in the ship of loneliness and home sickness.
Many Many thanks for your sincere prayers. Gratitude! Reva.:)
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Oh Reva, I can feel your heart here. It really is difficult. Yes, I guess I’ve revealed that I’m not just 20 years old eh. hehehe. I’m 40, moved out really young. I know it’s so tough right now, but hang in there. My hope and prayer is that your days start to shine a little brighter and become more bearable.
🙂
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Thank you so much Staci for your wonderful prayer. I just dont know what to say………… I am just humbled. Though you are 40………..you look no more than 20. 🙂
Stay wonderful and ageless! 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 Now this certainly requires 5 smiley faces. Wow, I look 20? Thanks sweetie, you’re too kind.
❤
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My Pleasure. Yes, you look too young. 5 Thanks for five smilies. 🙂
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and a few hearts too, from mine to yours.
❤ ❤ ❤
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Awww……………..so I give 5 hugs to you. 🙂
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Now I feel so loved.
🙂 ❤
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Feeling amazing, right? You have given me the same feeling. I too dwelt there……………….in that amazement. Love you for all the love and concern you have showed to me. Stay ageless! 🙂
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Awwwww, I love that, “Stay Ageless”. Always will in my spirit sweetie.
So glad we’ve met Reva.
🙂 ❤
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Take me in that same feeling. I am equally glad here. 🙂
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How beautiful. I too miss my mother a great deal. She was full of love… I will see her again one day… Diane
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Thank you dear Diane. I am glad to have your presence once again. Mother’s love is such, we cannot be full any time…………..we always crave for more. I badly miss my mom.
I am glad to know about your lovely mother. I pray for you and your mother. Stay Blessed! 🙂
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This is a beautiful and heartfelt poem, Reva. What a wonderful gift that you and your mother are close in spirit. Not all daughters feel loved and cherished by their mothers. Bask in this love. If my 14 yr old daughter always believes that I love her as deeply as I do, then I’ll know I mothered well.
Blessings ~ Wendy ❀
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Thank you, Wendy! I understand the feelings here. I owe myself and my life to my mother. Yes, I am fortunate enough to have a healing touch of mom’s love.
May you and your daughter be united in divine love and share the same umbrella of eternal love. Happy to meet you here. Prayers Assured! Stay smiling….Reva 🙂
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Thank you so much Nishi. 🙂
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Wow! I LOVE how heartfelt this is, truly, a gem of a poem. The line – “When bouts of pain, my eyes betray to confine” struck me, i cannot imagine how lonely you must be feeling in a foreign land and now a new place. I feel sorry yet good that this absolutely brilliant poem came out as a result of it.
I hope aunty gets to read this. She’ll be SO proud and will shed a tear for sure, you know mothers. :’)
Well, your virtual mom – ME! – is always here, if you ever want to talk about anything from pani puri to the Queen. 😀
Hope you’re feeling better today and if not then drown yourself in caffeine. -wow, what kind of a mother am i- ahahahaah sorry. CHEER UP, R! ❤
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Thank you my dearest. So glad I am to read your lovely appreciation and wonderful thoughts. “Bouts of pain in the eyes”——– the hardest and saddest part it was. I was unable to write any other line after that.. Took a long breather after that. Just could not complete then. There was that one moment when I felt like flying back to her and live my divine moments in her arms. No way……………I never let such emotions in front of her. She would die knowing my pain here. Some lump of emotions in my voice and she starts crying hearing the change in voice. Life has given so many cruel blows but she stood for me. I owe her more than my life. More than her, I am proud to be her part. Shed a tear? nope………….she would flow oceans as she always did for me.
Yes, I would definitely count on my virtual mamma whenever I am low spirited or want to share my high spirits. You know. My VM is LIGHT, she can fill up my dark spaces. Thank you VM for being my VM and I am indebted. I know previously, I shared about my panipuri story with you……………..and till date I donno the reason why. All I know is you are my good one.
Love you. Reva. 🙂
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Such regards for your mother, I’m proud of you, R. I read about your father in your reply to Staci’s comment so I can imagine how brave your mother must be and how much reverence you hold for all that she has done for you. Respect for you and aunty.
Aww, love my new name – VM! 😀 😀
It’s good to not have reasons, R! And I am glad I was a part of it! ❤
Much love!
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I’m glad you love your new name. Yes, it is liberating not to have reasons ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,so not hunting for one.
Thanks for being good part of it. Love and happiness to you.
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Truly magical night. Well written.
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Thank You, Vik. Stay Blessed!
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This is so beautiful. I’m sure your momma misses you just as much. They say “having a child is like having a piece of your heart walking around outside of your body.” Hugs to you!
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Thank you, my dearest. So happy to read your beautiful words. Fallen @“having a child is like having a piece of your heart walking around outside of your body.”
Surely, your mom must be very proud to have you as her daughter. Thank you for the hugs. Sending the warmth your way. 🙂
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A poem for the generation. We humans interpret things according to our own experiences and adventures. Your words above, for a your mother, resonate within me in areas only I can feel and understand. Working and living for this brand, you pressed vibrations and dispositions that cater to my fondness of this world we all share. HOT HAM AND CHEESE, your poem is the bees knees. Thank you kind spirit for sharing this with the world.
You are awesome.
N.N. Team
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Words would die hollow if I express the heartfelt feeling you have given to me, through them. I just cannot justify it verbally. I’m just bowing to the garnered honor in gratitude.
Thank you from the honest core of my heart. I am glad to learn that it resonated within you. Thank you so much for taking part in my longing. Cheese is okay but Ham is not okay…………I’m a strict vegetarian. 🙂 Stay Blessed!
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Well over 5 months now, (maybe more) I have been a vegetarian myself, so I am with you on the no meat campaign, the “hot ham and cheese” quote is a substitute for a figure of speech, as well as a rhyming factor for that saying.
I am slowly meshing to your words and emotions day by day… you have a gifted way of tampering with words and their emotions of the human spirit – just look at your fan base. I am merely one of many, but a sincere fan in my own eye. I thank you for what you do, I really mean this. You are extremely talented, and your way with verbal / lyrical roles of our human condition is out of this world.
You make our world a better place through emotions and love.
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Though I am a warrior of words, I am casting off my verbal weapons on the battlefield of modesty. So vast is your ocean of generosity that I am all drowned just at the shores of it.
Your appreciation is immensely treasured. I’m kneeling down defencelessly in all the humbleness for all the encouragement you have given me. Quality of feelings out rides the quantity of feelings……………and you are one of those who has uplifted me with quality boosting. I do not go up with mere fan base……………I soar high with top-drawer quality fan base. I am basically an emotional being and emotions sweep me off easily …………..be it smiles or tears. But that is the bond which connects us strongly.
My Sincere Gratitude. Stay wonderful. Reva. 🙂
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Reva, you are awesome. The compliments are over flourished with sincere gratitude to you and your words. Yes, you are an emotional being, in a positive light, and I feel that vibration from you. As that is why I am here, now, to express such happiness and joy to your site and poetry. The smiles and tears are tricky for me to decipher due to different humans ways of processing emotion, but you are brilliant with your expressions –
” Doomed are my lips, for I cannot kiss your feet;
Sanctified are my dreams, in which you e’er meet.
Although the fondness of your breath is poles apart;
Its fragrance steeped in my soul, can ne’er depart.”
WHATTTTTT????? This is what I am saying. I may be interpreting your words in the weirdest way, but your style rocks my soul. I cannot let it go.
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Aww…………..no words daring out. I understand tears and smiles are the tricky things and all of us have our unique ways to ventilate those. Some hide….some express……………..some just live in them. I am harboring a fond feeling reading that the emotional style is rocking your soul. All I can say is may your soul rock always to the rhythm of peace.
Bestest Wishes! 🙂
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I haven’t read this yet, BUT, I just wanted to leave my excitement level to you before reading it. – my critique coming soon.
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Great! Your critique is always welcome. Looking forward………..:)
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