The Aureate Bosom!

by beingeternal

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An endearing eventide phasis of bliss is staging so fine;

Graced in elusive imbues of tangerine and burgundy wine.

The fagged wings are harking back to their ardent comfy nests;

Blanking out sweats of tomorrow and all their piddly quests.

Flowers enshrouding their beaut beneath the mantle of twilight;

Solely to evince their colorized grandeur in the day-spring, bright.

The musings in water are sousing in plethora of glinting gold;

Parading a spectacular statement of placidity, Elysian and bold.

Embracing is the dusking sun, the all-time upstage skyline;

Watching is its fervid adorer, swaying on the caramel shoreline.

Image Courtesy:travel.nationalgeographic.com

61 comments on “The Aureate Bosom!”

  1. Samjoth Sashidharan says:
    November 22, 2014 at 8:48 am

    Two points….!!!
    – Adorable imagination.. U just keep imagining even to the minutest detail..!!! Classy..!!!
    – Your “vocabulary”.. Let me tell you..Tremendous.. Keep it up.. 🙂 How do u manage to write so well?? 😮

    Anyways.. keep smiling 🙂 .. had jus started reading your posts..!! 🙂

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    • beingeternal says:
      November 22, 2014 at 9:57 pm

      A big THANK YOU for your classy appreciation, Samjoth. I am glad to the core. Imagination is the only thing I am good at…so i just justify it in my poems…there is no secret ingredient here in my works… When you feel something very deeply…the best of words pass through your mind to put it beautifully and in complete sense….i guess. that works as good vocabulary.

      Thanks once again for stopping by and commenting on my works. Hope you enjoy…
      Stay Peaceful! 🙂
      Reva.

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  2. christybharath says:
    November 14, 2014 at 10:31 pm

    beautifully-spun imagery!

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  3. Stephen Griffin says:
    November 7, 2014 at 7:55 pm

    I like the feeling this conjures up. It’s very otherworldly.

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    • beingeternal says:
      November 7, 2014 at 9:40 pm

      Thank you very much, Stephen. Your kind appreciation means a lot to me. ‘Otherworldly’- this lovesome word of yours has left me with an elated feeling. Thank you once again. I appreciate your kind presence. Welcome aboard!

      Have a peaceful time.
      Reva.

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  4. namenews says:
    October 31, 2014 at 9:24 pm

    You always advance with your artistry. Something is different about this poem, do not get me wrong, it is the bees knees, but something spoke to me through a different tongue as I read your words. Now, I may be wrong, but I wanted to ask…. I hope you are well.

    Stay well, awesome, and thank you for sharing.

    -Matt@N.N.

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    • beingeternal says:
      October 31, 2014 at 10:22 pm

      Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Matt. Yes it is completely different this time. There is a threshold even to the overflowing emotional well. At times….it feels sick of its own overflow. Then it craves to see something different to alleviate its sickness. I did the same. All these days, I was writing what I already had and what I was having…this time I have written what I intended to see…..a beautiful sunshine to melt the frozen feelings.
      I was going through some emotional turmoil so did not feel like writing and spreading negativity. Took a break. This post is the first one after that. Just penned my honest intent.

      Thank you very much for the concern, Matt. I hope you are doing well. Stay Peaceful!

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  5. psychopathsgetbored28 says:
    October 31, 2014 at 6:24 pm

    Wow, R! I’m so happy and excited to finally read a new poem by you! And, this one is optimistic and powerful! I totally love the line – “The musings in water are sousing in plethora of glinting gold” – rich and poignant imagery. Reading this poem also gave me a sense of completeness and as it seemed from the last time we talked – a feeling of victory. It feels like you are in a happy place for now. And, I hope you stay there forever.
    This is what you do the best R, make me feel good about being here on WP and read such marvels. There is always so much to learn from you. ❤
    Much love and hugs, my lovely friend!

    PS – I have dropped a mail at the gmail id associated with your blog. I wanted to talk to someone about certain things that are going on in my life, lately, as I know only you can understand it and respond accordingly.

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    • beingeternal says:
      October 31, 2014 at 6:55 pm

      Thank you sweetie! You always take generous time to appreciate my works and this means a lot and lot to me. I am completely happy now. I was going through a rough phase but I emerged strong. Keeping happiness with you is an art only known after a bouts of pain. he he 🙂 Thank you for all your best wishes.
      I am honored. Stay Sweet! 🙂

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  6. sherinsk says:
    October 31, 2014 at 6:26 am

    The last line so beautiful 🙂

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    • beingeternal says:
      October 31, 2014 at 9:52 am

      Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. Stay Wonderful! 🙂

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      • sherinsk says:
        October 31, 2014 at 10:01 am

        If you don’t mind when you get time.
        -http://sherinchelad.wordpress.com/2014/10/29/radio/

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        • sherinsk says:
          October 31, 2014 at 10:24 am

          riva you are so professional.i really expected a comment for that.That is why i told you if you look into your posts and then read my posts you won’t feel to comment.Anyway thanks for the likes 🙂
          i always like to make things messy first and then try to clear it.stay blessed 🙂

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        • beingeternal says:
          October 31, 2014 at 10:25 am

          I read your post just now. It is refreshingly awesome. Good old days…
          Stay Blessed!

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          • sherinsk says:
            October 31, 2014 at 10:27 am

            oh no sorry i never expected such a big comment.That radio post is just doing me wonders.may be grandfather is watching from above.

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            • beingeternal says:
              October 31, 2014 at 10:35 am

              It is not about big or small comment. I liked it and was sharing my memories. The moment you shared that link…I read the word RADIO and thought it would be interesting because I am fond of old radios. And I am not disappointed. The post is really nice and true.

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              • sherinsk says:
                November 3, 2014 at 5:19 pm

                Thank you so much for the comment riva.This time i felt you really liked it.well how is life there in london?The living standards of people,education,transportation,food all better than india?what a stupid question?it surely is right?you have indian rice in home?i don’t know i get a feeling you are studying or working related to arts and all.Any temples nearby.Even if you don’t reply to this it is ok.god bless you good friend 🙂

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                • beingeternal says:
                  November 3, 2014 at 6:01 pm

                  My Pleasure. Life is cool alike the weather here. I am into editing unlike arts. I am not inclined to any particular food…anything vegetarian is all okay for me.

                  Stay Blessed!

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  7. 40something says:
    October 31, 2014 at 5:50 am

    The Master Painter, you are!! You painted is such a glorious word picture, Reva. Exquisite! I could see what you were describing in my mind…powerful!

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    • beingeternal says:
      October 31, 2014 at 9:51 am

      This is a top-drawer appreciation, Kirsten. This is far much to stomach. I am not a master painter….there is only ONE of such kind…who painted this entire cosmos. Was dwelling in sunshine after several days of being under gray clouds of life. The Sun seemed unique and beautiful on that day. You always get my mind’s understanding. Thank you veryyyyyyyyyyy muchhhhhh dear. Stay happy and stay blessed. Love you. 🙂

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  8. writersdream9 says:
    October 30, 2014 at 10:47 pm

    So awesome!! I am following you but for some reason I haven’t seen any emails withposts from a lot of people that I follow! I was concerned so here I am!! ❤

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  9. stacilys says:
    October 30, 2014 at 7:54 pm

    Oh wow Reva. You’ve outdone yourself. This is beautiful, really. You have a keen sense of the natural and painted an eloquent picture of appreciation for the true beauty and happenings of nature and creation.
    Just lovely. And I learned a new word – Aureate. I may just have to use that sometime.
    🙂 ❤
    p.s. I was wondering where you had been. You disappeared for a bit. Are you ok?

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    • beingeternal says:
      October 31, 2014 at 10:05 am

      Thank you very much, sweetie! I am swamped in all your generous rain of appreciation. Nature is ever inspiring but sometimes we miss to acknowledge its marvellous beauty. Honestly, I missed a major part. I was struggling exhaustingly to describe and justify the title with the apt word. It took a whole day to set. He He…and finally ended with AUREATE. Love this magical word. Was in love with this word even before knowing its meaning. (I was 18 yrs then) I rarely used it and today it just looks a fresh word.

      I was hiding beneath the gray blanket.Fugacious clouds of gloom had to pass one or the other day…and so I am back all smiling. It is better now. Thanks for the concern, my dear. Stay Beautiful!
      Love you. 🙂

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  10. fais says:
    October 30, 2014 at 12:26 pm

    so beautiful well written.
    best wishes

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    • beingeternal says:
      October 30, 2014 at 12:58 pm

      Thank you so much, Fais. I appreciate your lovely presence and kind words. Have penned this after almost two weeks. Was just out of inspiration all these days.

      Thank you once again for your best wishes. Stay Blessed! 🙂

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      • fais says:
        October 30, 2014 at 1:39 pm

        yeah was wondering where art thou , and what mischievous deeds you are up to with Halloween getting closer.
        glad to have you back

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        • beingeternal says:
          October 30, 2014 at 2:29 pm

          Ha Ha Ha. :)Yes….Halloween is close by and all creepy thoughts setting in. Mind’s doors are wide open to gloomy thoughts and undefined characters. Lunar laughs intertwined with bouts of aggression and then.. tears…and then silence….. and what not. Did not want to scare lovely and wonderful people here on wordpress…was protecting you all from me and my devilish thoughts.
          I fought my inside demons and now, sane enough to interact with wise people again. Hope you had peaceful days. So many blogposts to read….including your lovely ones. Will do my best to read all.

          Stay Blessed! 🙂

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  11. Euphonos says:
    October 30, 2014 at 1:42 am

    Awesome 🙂 I fell in love with “Embracing is the dusking sun….”

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  12. Akhiz says:
    October 29, 2014 at 11:14 pm

    your choice of words is always wonderful, the way you weave them together is a pleasure to read…. i love the poem and i love the picture too, that sun is one mesmerizing site 🙂

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    • beingeternal says:
      October 30, 2014 at 10:31 am

      Thank you very much, Akhiz. It is always wonderful to see such kind and beautiful appreciation. I am glad that you love my immature and random works. Yes, Sun is one mesmerizing thing…..giving hope and warmth to the frozen hearts.

      Thank you once again. Stay Blessed! 🙂

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  13. Victor Terrien says:
    October 29, 2014 at 9:10 pm

    This entire poem is really lovely! Ah, that second line. You have such a way with words. 🙂

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    • beingeternal says:
      October 29, 2014 at 9:19 pm

      Thank you very much, Victor. Honest little encouragement was/is all I craved/crave for…………and was never empty handed because of amazing and ever encouraging friends like you.

      Thank you once again. Stay Blessed! 🙂

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  14. viktoryarch says:
    October 29, 2014 at 9:09 pm

    The orange glow on setting sun embrace my skin.
    The warmth of evening breeze dive deeper in my soul.
    With echoes of softest music the love sings the tunes within,
    Empowering me to let the love grow.
    Best wishes….
    Lovely poem of passed summer days.

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  15. F.G.M. says:
    October 29, 2014 at 9:01 pm

    “Embracing is the dusking sun, the all-time upstage skyline;
    Watching is its fervid adorer, swaying on the caramel shoreline.”
    I adore these final lines… wonderful poem! I love your vocabulary – and learn a lot thanks to you 🙂 Thank you and ♥♥ 🙂

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    • beingeternal says:
      October 29, 2014 at 9:07 pm

      Aww….thank you so much, Fred. Your appreciation means a lot to me. I am on cloud nine reading your kind words. My poem is graced with your lovely encouragement. Thank you once again.
      Stay Peaceful! 🙂

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