Amidst the Unknown Sands….

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Dawn on me secretly my soulmate……..your saving grace;

Thaw my frozen down spirit along the Sun’s maiden rays.

Do not adjourn yourself from me, you, the absolute divine;

Redeem mercy to this iniquitous soul, to you, ever I entwine.

 

Consecrate me all over again with your intoxicating smile;

Avail me to steer still, this shimmying ship of tears for a while.

Played out to core, I am, tagging your moonily reflection;

Tranquilize me to reposeful sopor with your genial affection.

 

Kneeling in the autumn of life, imploring you to be the spring;

All the nests are bygone tales yet birds of hope blithely sing.

Rainfall pinks my door, frequenting as an unwished-for guest;

Enfeebling itself, pouring all but betraying to slake my thirst.

 

Despair tramping stealthily, is all I construe in this noisy air;

Do not rob me off my serenity, my silent and rightful share.

Quivers is my trusted desire in this unfeeling wintry cold;

Tune up my faith underneath your love blanket’s warm fold.

 

Stir up in me, the compassionate spark, and the holy will to live;

Pep up me to espouse your guiding light and justly forgive.

Tincture your remembrance in all my nescient voids of sense;

Beef up me to entomb the carking clouds of fears, so dense.

 

Secure me fondly with your lovesome lace, all night and day;

Let no anguish of yesterday or vex of futurity make their way.

Settle softly alongside me, kissing my frail and unnerved hands;

Embodying the known friendliness amidst the unknown sands….


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49 comments on “Amidst the Unknown Sands….

  1. Beautiful. There are no words. Beautiful

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  2. Needless to say, it is brilliant, cause it already is above that tag! 🙂

    so here i write these words to you-

    “Relentlessly fighting the dark
    To through my eyes to your spark
    Thwarting these cold tears freezing my oceans,
    Your love is my galaxy, your smiles a thousand suns” 😛

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  3. Beautiful writing! Thank you for sharing it. 🙂

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you ever so much my dear friend. Your beautiful appreciation counts a lot. Pleasure is all mine to have such amazing people as you to read my works. I am humbled.

      Stay Blessed!
      Reva.

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  4. SirenaTales says:

    A very lush, visceral and gorgeous prayer, Reva. Thank you for your work. xoxo

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  5. JuJuwe says:

    Hi Reva. Hope you are doing ok in this Winter, warm yourself good in the love of your beloved ones.
    Ok, now to this poem. I always admire the words you chose. Always beautiful and always they are new to me ( many of them ) since I write poems just recently hehe.
    And I love the …do not adjourn yourself from me, you, the absolute divine… it’s like I am talking to my God 😊 in my hopeless being.
    Great great piece if work, Reva.
    I am sorry I dont get in touch with you often. Your works most of the time, have me spare a time to understand not just reading it☺

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    • beingeternal says:

      Oh Julia…..so nice to hear from you. I am doing all fine in His warmth of love. I am all happy to know your lovely and kind thoughts on my poems. This was more of a prayer…..asking for protection and love…..wherein, one party is always speaking and the other party is always listening. 🙂

      Do not be sorry for anything, my dear. No worries…..you are always here in my thoughts if not on my blog. We share a relation outside this blog too. Keep this in mind always. Hope you are doing great. Prayers Assured! 🙂

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  6. 40something says:

    What a beautiful conversation from your heart sweet, Reva. My favorite line (it was really hard to pick in this one) “Tune up my faith underneath your love blanket’s warm fold.” I used to play the violin when I was a child. Our teacher taught us that it was always a good thing to keep our instruments tuned. If we neglected to tune them on a regular basis we would find that our violins were out of tune and that it would take longer to tune them properly. I love the image of staying beneath His “love blanket’s warm fold” as He keeps our faith in tune. Beautiful…simply beautiful. Blessings

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    • beingeternal says:

      Ahhh…Kirsten, you surely got the purport in a most lovely way. Love you so much for sharing your musical thoughts…The violin talk is beyond beautiful. Glad to know about your awesome teacher…the wisdom en-wrapped in her words is very commendable. True….we have to tune up our instruments of faith ritually otherwise the divine music is missed. Lets not wait until things reach a state of irreparability. His love blanket folds are ever warm…..the warmth easily felt by quivering souls.

      Gratitude to you from the core of my heart for your generous time appreciating my poem. Your dainty words echo longer.
      Loads of love and warmest hugs! 🙂

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  7. maryam191 says:

    Surreal 🙂
    Beyond amazing ! It felt like some music, dancing rhymes. How can someone be so perfect with words 😉
    loved each and every line of it 🙂

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you my dear Maryam…..that was a splendid appreciation. I am glad to know your lovely thoughts in your beaming words. I am not that perfect with my words, dear….sometimes they just flow and sometimes they are reluctant to come to my memory even. 😦
      Thank you once again for your generous words. Stay Blessed!

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  8. Oh this poem is like a wonderland, R. Loved every bit of it – as said already the way you bought in seasons was fantastic! What a beautiful prayer. ❤

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you my sweetie for your sweetest and kind appreciation. Seasons are always fantastic to weave in poems of heart. Autumn leaves with a hope for spring and I love that. Hope you are all well now.
      Stay Happy! 🙂

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  9. Thanks for visiting and leading me to your blog. You poems have a beautiful rhythm all there own.

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    • beingeternal says:

      Pleasure is all mine, John. Thank you ever so much for your beautiful presence on my blog. I am glad to realize your lovely opinion on my poems. Welcome aboard!

      Have a peaceful week.
      Reva. 🙂

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  10. Akhiz says:

    Hi,
    This is to notify you that you’ve been nominated for the One Lovely Blog Award.

    http://akhizmunawar.wordpress.com/2014/11/06/one-lovely-blog-award/

    Take Care and stay Blessed 🙂

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you Akhiz for considering my blog for nomination. My blog has been nominated for four other awards too, recently and I have not done my part. It may take a little longer for me to post. I am really glad to be honored this way. Thank you once again and stay blessed. 🙂

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  11. Akhiz says:

    Hey,
    This is to notify you that you’ve been nominated for the One Lovely Blog Award.

    http://akhizmunawar.wordpress.com/2014/11/06/one-lovely-blog-award/

    Take Care 🙂

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  12. stacilys says:

    Wow, what a lovely prayer. Truly soulful and deep, coming from deep within the core Reva. I can totally relate. I can sense the longing for peace and help with the struggles of life.
    “Kneeling in the autumn of life, imploring you to be the spring”
    –Oh yes, autumn is like a time reaching close to death. The death of winter. When spring comes though, one can see how the harshness was necessary for growth. It’s tough, autumn and winter, but what a relief when spring comes eh. It’s like the saying, “No pain, no gain”
    🙂

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  13. “Kneeling in the autumn of life, imploring you to be the spring”..

    This is a hard hitting line..! So beautifully penned, so divine to read!

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you my dear friend for your beautiful appreciation. Thats my favorite line too. I was surprised to see it settling so beautifully there.
      Thank you once again for your lovely words. Stay Blessed!

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  14. alcan05 says:

    Your blog is simply beautiful! You’re really amazing :’)

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  15. F.G.M. says:

    “Stir up in me, the compassionate spark, and the holy will to live”
    It sounds like a prayer, a wonderful prayer! Thank you and much ♥

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  16. How lovely! I particularly like the way you brought in the image of the seasons with this line: “Kneeling in the autumn of life, imploring you to be the spring”

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  17. Beautiful. What inspired you to write this piece?

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    • beingeternal says:

      Loss is what inspires to hope…pain is what inspires to hope for healing… Void in me craved for fulfilment….loneliness in me longed for friendliness….. every lovely emotion of human inspired me to pen this. thank you for stopping by. I am glad at your curiosity.Stay Blessed! 🙂

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  18. Akhiz says:

    Stir up in me, the compassionate spark, and the holy will to live;

    Pep up me to espouse your guiding light and justly forgive.

    Tincture your remembrance in all my nescient voids of sense;

    Beef up me to entomb the carking clouds of fears, so dense.

    had to read this 3,4 times and it has blown me away… amazing writing.

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