Warming Suns and Quenching Rains!

Sometimes_sun__sometimes_rain_by_kelhus

Summers thrummed sunny song;
Burning down, staggeringly long.
Sopped up are its oodles of rays;
Still surfaces, the warmth’s chase.
Monsoons gestated, over again;
Birthing puffy clouds…….. in vain.
Wells high, rained and drenched;
Thirst’s quest, still unquenched.


Image Courtesy: http://www.deviantart.net

Advertisements

22 comments on “Warming Suns and Quenching Rains!

  1. Mike says:

    An inspited lexicon delivers in style – nicely done.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. sherinsk says:

    May be you didn’t mean this but i believe this poem also has the meaning there is still hope after setbacks right? ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    • beingeternal says:

      I definitely did not mean hope here. It was just a random thought lurking around the greediness of human heart. Seasons come and go but man’s thirst for warmth is never quenched. The moment you get something, you desire for more. And there goes this bootless quest.

      Like

  3. Dalo 2013 says:

    Beautiful shot and the words melt with the photo ~

    Liked by 1 person

  4. fotografaire says:

    Beautiful imagery, and lovely poem to go with. Enjoy your week.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. How emotional….and what a description of longing….for someone…or something…
    Really nice Reva ๐Ÿ™‚
    Thanks for sharing…
    stay happy and stay blessed ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Well this is just lovely. Great piece of writing! ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Watch your iambic pentameter: ‘Birthing puffy clouds, all in vain.’ you might try: ‘Birthing puffy clouds in vain’, leaving out the word ‘all’, and it will flow much more smoothly on that particular line. All in all though, a highly imaginative, picturesque filled with hidden meaning! And I’d add: ‘A brilliant addition to wordpress.com’

    Liked by 1 person

    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you my dear friend for letting me know something worth knowing. “Lambic Pentameter” is great. Your beautiful suggestion taken in. ๐Ÿ™‚
      Many thanks for appreciating my little poem.
      Stay Blessed!

      Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s