Summers thrummed sunny song;
Burning down, staggeringly long.
Sopped up are its oodles of rays;
Still surfaces, the warmth’s chase.
Monsoons gestated, over again;
Birthing puffy clouds…….. in vain.
Wells high, rained and drenched;
Thirst’s quest, still unquenched.
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An inspited lexicon delivers in style – nicely done.
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*inspired
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Well taken, no worries.😊
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He he… Thank you so much for your awesome appreciation, Mike. Surprised to read “lexicon”. Hope you are doing fabulous. Stay grand! Reva. 😊
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May be you didn’t mean this but i believe this poem also has the meaning there is still hope after setbacks right? 🙂
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I definitely did not mean hope here. It was just a random thought lurking around the greediness of human heart. Seasons come and go but man’s thirst for warmth is never quenched. The moment you get something, you desire for more. And there goes this bootless quest.
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Beautiful shot and the words melt with the photo ~
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Ahh… Thank you so much my dear friend. Your beautiful words are much appreciated. Hope you are doing well. Stay happy!
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🙂 Staying happy ~ that is the key isn’t it, Cheers!
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Absolutely, sweetie. Cheers!!
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Beautiful imagery, and lovely poem to go with. Enjoy your week.
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Thank you very much for the appreciation and warm wishes. Enjoy your week, as well.
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How emotional….and what a description of longing….for someone…or something…
Really nice Reva 🙂
Thanks for sharing…
stay happy and stay blessed 🙂
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Thank you my dear Rosalyn. Your beautiful appreciation is always treasured. Hope you are doing all well. Many thanks for your lovely wishes. Stay happy as well.😀
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❤
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You write amazing and real. Looking forward to read more from you. Stay Blessed!
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Thank you 😊it’s people like you I learn from
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My Pleasure. Thank you very much for your presence on my blog. I have gone through few of your writings and I found them to be profound. Will definitely visit to rob some inspiration from your beautiful blog. Until then…stay happy. 🙂
Reva.
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Well this is just lovely. Great piece of writing! 🙂
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Thanks a zillion, Victor. Grateful to you for the lovely appreciation. Stay Peaceful! 🙂
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Watch your iambic pentameter: ‘Birthing puffy clouds, all in vain.’ you might try: ‘Birthing puffy clouds in vain’, leaving out the word ‘all’, and it will flow much more smoothly on that particular line. All in all though, a highly imaginative, picturesque filled with hidden meaning! And I’d add: ‘A brilliant addition to wordpress.com’
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Thank you my dear friend for letting me know something worth knowing. “Lambic Pentameter” is great. Your beautiful suggestion taken in. 🙂
Many thanks for appreciating my little poem.
Stay Blessed!
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