Elating Breaths of Someone.


Far-off on the shimmering waters of ocean,
A jaded day kips down to sip its pacific potion.
Evening bride’s satiny veil, sedately lowers;
Behind the unknown skyline, she mistily hovers.
Overwhelms the dusky beaut, farming crimson;
Curling me by an aureate thread of emotion.
On this sempiternal road of unfading memory,
My grief and glee embark on a vagrant spree.
An unsounded ail from the locus of ย my whole,
Raises a thundery racket in the recondite soul.
The frosty tears, unthaw through my folded eyes;
As elating breaths of someone, abide my sighs.
Bewraying my sight, his presence adjoins me warm;
And my spirit’s queasiness, greets its ethereal calm.

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57 comments on “Elating Breaths of Someone.

  1. wow incredible words

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  2. Beautiful! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Missing you. hope all is well

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  4. Beautiful words ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. Another heart-warmed emotions echoing from your inner self in a pursuit of reflecting the introspection and the divine-trust. So loved this Reva ๐Ÿ™‚ Stay smiling ๐Ÿ™‚

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you my dearest. Apologies for my late reply. Have been busy with some pressing thing. Part of bonus, my laptop started troubling me. Hope you have been doing great. Amidst my business, I thought of wonderful persons like you….still missing. Join you all very soon. Stay Smiling. Love you.

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  6. mspahr says:

    This is stunning. You are stunning. Always.

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you my dear friend for your encouraging words. Was away from blogging thing for a while… and am still not aboard. Hope to join you soon. Until then…keep writing and stay smiling. Take care. ๐Ÿ™‚


  7. Tiny says:

    Beautiful poem! Loved it!

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  8. I read this all wrong the first time where I wanted to write do you want me to make rooster soup. Then I read it again and the words saturated within me. Beautiful and I always felt you as a calm person.

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  9. Great and where from you get these soulful words…! very nice ..!

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  10. RamShackld says:

    This is such a superb piece of poetry. So lyrical. So beautiful. Such a heart melting expression! More power to you for concocting soulful words! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  11. I can only hope to find a fraction of the peace that’s described herein! Your words are mesmerizing as always ๐Ÿ™‚

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  12. stacilys says:

    Heyyyyyy Reva. Great to see and read you again. I can truly relate to this poem. When I have times of silence and solitude, when I’m alone with my maker, and He meets with me there – there’s nothing like it. Tears stream down my cheeks because of the intense peace and tranquility and stillness He places in me.
    Bless you sweetie.
    ๐Ÿ™‚ โค

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