Far-off on the shimmering waters of ocean,
A jaded day kips down to sip its pacific potion.
Evening bride’s satiny veil, sedately lowers;
Behind the unknown skyline, she mistily hovers.
Overwhelms the dusky beaut, farming crimson;
Curling me by an aureate thread of emotion.
On this sempiternal road of unfading memory,
My grief and glee embark on a vagrant spree.
An unsounded ail from the locus of my whole,
Raises a thundery racket in the recondite soul.
The frosty tears, unthaw through my folded eyes;
As elating breaths of someone, abide my sighs.
Bewraying my sight, his presence adjoins me warm;
And my spirit’s queasiness, greets its ethereal calm.
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wow incredible words
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Thank you very much my friend. 🙂
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Beautiful! 🙂
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Thank you, Soumya, for your beautiful presence and kind words. Stay around and stay smiling!
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Missing you. hope all is well
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Thanks for your concern, dear. I moved much away from London. Placing myself gently in another land…..hence the hiatus. I’m aware of your father’s demise…..and all I can say is beef up your spirits. My prayers for you and your family.
Peace and strength to you.
Reva.
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Thank you for your kind words. They are much appreciated. Hope to see you on wordpress again with your poetry which is a delicacy to the mind.
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My Pleasure. Happy to be here again. Many thanks for your healthy opinion on my poetry. Stay strong!
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Thank you
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My Pleasure.
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Beautiful words 🙂
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Thank you very much my dear friend. Hope you are doing all well.
Reva.
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Where have you gone??
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Done with my project. Currently in India. Hope you are in finest of spirits. Take
Care
Reva.
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Nice to hear about you..! Great busy with your project..!
I am also fine..and staying around you to find you..! 😉
take care and see you soon Reva..!
Tahir
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So nice of you Tahir. Take care, you too.
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Thanks dear Reva..!
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My pleasure. Happy friendship day Tahir.
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YEP…Happy Friendship Day… Dearest Reva..! 😉
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Thank you.
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you welcome..!
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🙂
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Another heart-warmed emotions echoing from your inner self in a pursuit of reflecting the introspection and the divine-trust. So loved this Reva 🙂 Stay smiling 🙂
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Thank you my dearest. Apologies for my late reply. Have been busy with some pressing thing. Part of bonus, my laptop started troubling me. Hope you have been doing great. Amidst my business, I thought of wonderful persons like you….still missing. Join you all very soon. Stay Smiling. Love you.
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This is stunning. You are stunning. Always.
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Thank you my dear friend for your encouraging words. Was away from blogging thing for a while… and am still not aboard. Hope to join you soon. Until then…keep writing and stay smiling. Take care. 🙂
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Beautiful poem! Loved it!
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Thank you so much for your presence and beautiful words. Stay happy!
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I read this all wrong the first time where I wanted to write do you want me to make rooster soup. Then I read it again and the words saturated within me. Beautiful and I always felt you as a calm person.
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He He…I am a vegetarian and chicken soup will not help. Thanks for your generosity.
Now, bit about myself- I am a calm person by nature but extremely emotional. I sweep off myself in my flooding emotions. And I am a chatter box at one end. When I talk, I skip all commas, colon, semi colons……it would be a never ending stretch. I dont know I am slanted to extremities. I have to opt moderation.
Thank you once again. Have a beautiful weekend.
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I can live with that lol I have some same quality. Can I hit the rooster over the head with a carrot. With your permission can I showcase one of your poems on my site???
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I am splitting into lunar laughter. So sad…the rooster is cursing the carrot. Oh yes dear…you can share my poems any time. My poems are happy to warm themselves on your lovely site. No issues. Thank you for considering my poems for the display.
Stay Grand!
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You’re welcome. I will do this tomorrow.
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😃
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Great and where from you get these soulful words…! very nice ..!
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Thank you. No secrets…I get them from my restless soul, Tahir.
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No doubt, you are so impressive feeling poet..!why did you not publish your book Reva..?
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Thanks for your boosting Tahir but I am no good at publishing my thing. I have not reached that stage yet. Still a long long way to go. But would definitely consider if the publisher is okay.
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My Friend Reva..!
May be till death we couldn’t reach our ideal stage..so when you think you are doing good…you should publish in shape of book..! And definitely people will like good thoughts like you..!
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He He… agree that reaching a stage is endless. I have not given any thought to it. I guess, i need more stability, displaying my works.
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Yea life needs stability to do any work..!
I believe your words have power and feelings because you have power to give life to lines as a painter..! Hope one day i will find your book or painting exhibition..
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Thank you for you think so positive about me. Grateful for all the encouragement you been giving me. Hope one day I see you reading my book with a wide smile.
Stay Peaceful!
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You deserve all my thoughts…!! Off course one day this revolutionary step would b taken and you will send me ur signed book…and I will read ur poetry with Oxford dictionary…hahaha…stay happy and live around…!!
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Ahh, that is so kind of you Tahir. I appreciate your kindest thoughts. I am imagining my signed book in your hands. Oxford dictionary would be a complementary one. Thanks a zillion for motivating me. Stay happy as well.
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My pleasure you chose such nice words for me…i know that day is not far away when i will able to get your book…! Take decisions quickly Reva…! Because Zindagi Milay gi na Dubara..!
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Thank you Tahir. I will definitely take a chance.so true…. Zindagi sirf ek dafah hi milti hai.
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You welcome dear Reva…i hope Isi zindgi main apki collection mil jaya GI..have a safe time…
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Thank you. Have a blessed time.
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This is such a superb piece of poetry. So lyrical. So beautiful. Such a heart melting expression! More power to you for concocting soulful words! 🙂
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Thank you so much friend. I appreciate your generosity. Endless gratitude …..no words. Stay grand!
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I can only hope to find a fraction of the peace that’s described herein! Your words are mesmerizing as always 🙂
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Thank you so much my dear for your warming words. May you never depart from your peace. Prayers Assured!
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Thank you again! 😊
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You are welcome always.
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Heyyyyyy Reva. Great to see and read you again. I can truly relate to this poem. When I have times of silence and solitude, when I’m alone with my maker, and He meets with me there – there’s nothing like it. Tears stream down my cheeks because of the intense peace and tranquility and stillness He places in me.
Bless you sweetie.
🙂 ❤
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Thank you so much sweetie. Great to have you back too…after a long long time. Hope you had heavenly time with your mother around.
True, peace is untellable.It is just felt in silence of spirit. Divine presence becalms both mind and spirit.
Hoping peaceful moments ever….
Stay Peaceful!
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