Nature’s in-frangible awesomeness, the balmiest splendor;
Gestates the everlastingly hexing beauty of wonder.
Oriented scant, are its sweet-scented moments on earth;
But the supernal beauty’s saga of esteem, has no dearth.
Keels it mildly to the coolheaded breeze, mirthfully perched;
Caressed euphorically with love and exquisitely attended.
Ornaments itself in the most burnished of the flushed red;
To the mesmeric redolence, this beaut is celestially wed.
Aborigine of grace, speaks the fine language of peace;
Love is its culture, modesty is its attire, carried in ease.
Echoes the raspy wind’s bell and tiny spirit is glad to kneel;
Descending graciously and thinly to ratify the death’s deal.
Its cushy petals autumn, fly and dry by the sun-baked heat;
But the memorable dawdling essence, reincarnate and repeat.
Profoundly fathoming is this suave and orphic flavored power;
Drawing me gently to the ethereal silence of the fallen flower.
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Beautiful, Reva. The fallen flower is such a wonderful metaphor for the way some of us feel about the seasons of our lives. Does that make sense? We fall, yet the seeds that are released when we fall are what create the flower that blooms again in another season. Your word choices as always are beyond exquisite…you word smith, you! Blessings
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Thank you my dearest Kirsten. Your words make my smile adhere to my lips tightly. You are right…fallen flower is about the life’s seasons. We fall to get created in another beautiful form….The silence in that fall is an absolute bliss. Your interpretation is beautiful and the words are a beautiful poem in themselves. You are bringing me closer to my dream of becoming word smith. :)Thank you for the blessings. Stay Wonderful!
Love you. 🙂
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Hey, I nominated your blog for THE ONE LOVELY BLOG AWARD.
Best wishes!
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Thank you so much Maryam. My blog is too much flooded with nominations now a days…. I really appreciate your consideration. Just gimme lil time to post. so many are still pending. It is really an honor to be recognized in such a sweet and generous way by you. Thank you once again, dear. I will definitely act my part. Stay Blessed!
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My pleasure 🙂
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Mine too. 🙂
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WOW – I have never read anything so sanguine about a fallen flower. Beauty sure does lie in the beholder’s eye.
“Profoundly fathoming is this suave and orphic flavored power;
Drawing me gently to the ethereal silence of the fallen flower.” – I adore these lines! So delicately beautiful, and the phrase ‘orphic flavoured power’ is exquisite.
Brilliant and flawless, as always, R. ❤
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Thank you D!. You have strongly appreciated this delicate poem of mine. I am glad you liked it so much. Rightly said, beauty does lie in the beholder’s eye. Thank you once again for such profound inclination.
Shine Bright!
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Can you do me a favor.when you get time come to skype so that i can learn some lovely english words that can be used in great poems like these. 🙂
I don’t know what to say but why sad poems now a days? 😛
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I am not that literate to teach you English. I am still a learner….and I learn from observing and reading others’ beautiful works. I am sorry you are very well mistaken. It is not a sad poem it is a poem on solitude….the deep silence……the silence in which life is stilled but not ended.
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Thank you for giving me the opportunity to see the sky and sun brighter each day.
You are inspiring…
http://followingthegoldenquill.wordpress.com/2014/11/04/very-inspiring-blogger-award/
Glad to know you through the WordPress.
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My Pleasure. Thank you very much for the nomination, Vik. I have not responded promptly to your recent nomination yet. The reason being….I am still hunting for the best blogs(nominees) . I just do not want to repeat all. Looking forward to give chance to other deserving blogs. I will post ASAP.
Thank you once again. I am equally glad to know you. Stay Wonderful!
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Take your time.
Be yourself and smile.
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Thanks a lot. Smiles on.. 🙂
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Wow Reva. This is simply deep. You really dug deep to find just the right words to express your thoughts on the simplicity of this sweet fallen flower.
Lovely
🙂 ❤
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Thank you my dearest for your lovesome words. “the simplicity of the fallen flower”—love this phrase immensely. And I guess…simple things are the damn toughest things to convey…so had to dug too deep.
I am glad you liked it. Stay Beautiful and Peaceful!
Love you.
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Ohhhhh, I’m so glad you ‘love the phrase immensely.’
Tons of love to you, my friend
🙂 ❤
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Thank you. Loads of love to you too. Stay blissful! 🙂
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This is the grace of the nature
in which the whole living beings are nurtured
the effort to rapture its eloquence through defilement
would the future get a chance to enjoy this wonderment?
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Thank you so much Vinz for sharing your eloquent words. My poem is all graced now. Love your profound thoughts. Yes, the future will definitely get a chance if allowed. Loads of love to you.
Stay Wonderful!
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A fallen flower with opened future.
It sees the whole world, traveling by day and night.
To tell the tales of the fallen and risen….
Sunrays tickle the petals with warm sight.
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Awesomely beautiful lines! Thank you so much, Vik. To tell the tales of the fallen and risen….these words are just profound. You have added much beauty to my poem. Thanks for sharing such beauty. Stay Peaceful. 🙂
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Thank you for sharing the poem.
All of your poems are amazing, vibrant, and full of emotions.
🙂
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My Pleasure. Thank you for all the lovely words and generous encouragement you have been giving me…….which I always needed. You were the first one to recognize and encourage by nominating my work. I will be always indebted for that.
Stay Blessed! 🙂
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I am happy to discover your work.
Stay happy.
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I am equally happy that my work was and is discovered by an amazing friend like you. Stay Amazing! 🙂
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It’s my pleasure.
But your comment give me a happy-tear-eye.
I would considered an honor to be the first one to recognize your beautiful poetic gift….
Happy writing and being you.
🙂
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It is honestly an honor to have met you, Vik. I know…i was completely new here on WP then….knowing none. Was simply penning my ramblings …totally spineless and nerveless. Many just followed and commented my writing because i too followed their works and commented. It was just mutual.
But you were always there to support me right from the day we met….irrespective of me following your works or commenting. I still remember how I cried like a lil baby on seeing your comment carrying that maiden nomination. It still means a lot to me. But at once…i felt :Do i really deserve? ….Thanks a lot for everything.
Thats why I was very much worried when you went on a Sabbath from your blogging for a while. You know….thats what i call a fear of losing some beautiful encouragement.Thanks to my memory….i somehow traced you on twitter.
Stay blessed! 🙂
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Beautiful words deserve beautiful awards.
Excuse me for a moment…sniff, sniff…
Thank you for kind words.
But it was you who traced me and encouraged me to continue the blog. I am grateful to you.
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Pleasure is all mine. I will not take any credit for this. Happy that you are back on WP to encourage so many of us. Stay Happy…always. 🙂
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Glad to have you on the inspiration board.
Keep inspiring and smiling.
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Thank you, VIK. Smiles on. 🙂
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this poem is so simple yet has so many meanings, lovely choice of words…… we have a big plant of the same flower pictured here in the garden at my house, its a lovely sight in full bloom. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Akhiz. this poem is a few minute scribbling on seeing a fallen flower in my garden. Tried to maintain a subtle flavor in this poem just for a change. The flower is called Hibiscus (China rose/ flame of the forest). Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Stay Blessed! 🙂
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I absolutely love tour title… fallen flower… it’s so poetical! You’ve written four quatrains of pure Poetry! I love them and, as ever, your vocabulary (great adjectives in particular) have a nice week :-)♥
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Thank you so much, Fred. Was watching the fallen flowers in my garden….and a beautiful thought took birth instantly. “Fallen Flower” was the word that echoed deep. So just penned it fresh from the garden. Now, I call your kind words “Pure Appreciation”. Immensely in love with your kind adjective PURE. Thanks a lot.
Have a peaceful time. 🙂
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