Winging Diamonds!

vira

Elegant raindrops ensconce slow
On the chiseled leaves, they lightly row
Alike the exquisitely cut, fly-speck, lambent diamonds
Inventing an ineluctable spell in beaming hundreds
When the day’s ritual threshold is sedately shut
To slumber, all jaded flowers are tardily put
The silverish treasures glisten their best
Against the black nights’ velvety vest
As duskiness, fares to the close
Ended are the glowing shows
Rejoining the Eternity
Obviating Spree
They merely
Fly


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105 comments on “Winging Diamonds!

  1. That’s a beauty! I’m speechless.

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  2. Superb…..I am speechless.

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  3. Beautiful words. You’re so creative. 🌟

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  4. Euphonos says:

    Thank you. It is just amazing post 🙂
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    Cheers
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  5. alcan05 says:

    You’re simply amazing! I’ve literally no words! Wow :’)

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  6. bert0001 says:

    wondering which silences you had to attend —
    wishing you a great holiday season, and a wonderfull 2015

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  7. What a beautiful poem! It’s a treat for the eyes and the soul as well. The rhymes are delightful and this is a lovely poem to read aloud.
    Happy holidays! 🙂

    -Amrita

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    • beingeternal says:

      First off, I welcome your beautiful presence on my blog. I am immensely happy to read your beautiful appreciation. Thank you so much , dear Amrita for your lovesome words and warm greetings. Apologies for not being prompt. Hope you are having a blissful time. Wishing you a year full of blessings and smiles.

      Reva. 🙂

      Like

  8. angielynn says:

    Looks especially beautiful and inspiring, especially with the WordPress snow falling on the site! 🙂

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you very much Angielynn. Happy to know your kind opinion on my blog. I appreciate your beautiful presence here. I do agree…the snow fall looks just fantastic on the site. Thanks for noticing that subtle beauty. Hope you are having a blissful time.

      Stay Blessed!
      Reva. 🙂

      Like

  9. Topaz says:

    Wow, what a delicately beautiful poem. I love the shape – it’s deliberate yet subtle, and you manage to convey not only startling vivid imagery, but also rhyming as well! (If only I could master the same effect, but alas, I have never been able to write a rhyming poem.) Oh, and gorgeous photo too, I might add – did you take it yourself? x

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    • beingeternal says:

      Wow…what a beautiful appreciation. Feeling elated reading your words…many thanks to you, Topaz. Penning a rhyming poem is more fun…try one.I would be glad to read yours. The image courtesy …is all Google. I have put the image link below the poem. FYI..I am not good at photography so always at the mercy of photos taken by others.
      P.S. My apologies for not being prompt enough. Was away from blogging for a while. Hope you understand. 🙂
      Stay Sweet!
      Reva.

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  10. The words and shape of the poem pair so well together! The eloquence is clear here!

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    • beingeternal says:

      Gratitude to you, Christy. Happy, knowing your good opinion on “Winging Diamonds”. Many thanks to you for the beautiful appreciation. I too liked the diamond shape… it was just an accidental construction.but immensely happy with that. Hope you are doing all well.

      Stay grand!
      Reva.

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  11. Beautiful and I love how it is cleverly presented too! Keep up the great writing.

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  12. Great words and expressions of thoughts..!
    Missing you..! 🙂

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  13. Fabulous thoughts and beautifully articulated…love the black and while composition of the picture…

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  14. Geneviève says:

    Gorgeous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and then some!

    Stay Sparkly, Angel!

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you very much, my beautiful Genie. I am little busy with my project work…sorry for the delay in showing up to reply. I hope you understand, sweetie.
      Thank you once again for the sparkling wishes…
      Love you. 🙂

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  15. Akhiz says:

    Beautiful…. the drops of water on grass are indeed one of the most comforting sights to the eyes, love your inspiration, this poem is a work of art in writing like Picasso was in painting:)

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    • beingeternal says:

      Wow…what a splendid appreciation to cherish. Thank you very much Akhiz…was busy with my project so could not reply to you promptly. checked your message just now.
      I have a long way to justify what you have talked about my works in comparison to the great Picasso. But I am glad..you feel so.
      Thanks for the elephantine support, you ever render.
      Stay Blessed! 🙂

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  16. Samjoth Sashidharan says:

    Wow..!! Awesome..!!

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  17. stacilys says:

    This is lovely Reva. For me, it’s very befitting right now, because my seven year old recently took an interest in fire-flies. They really are amazing little creatures, aren’t they.
    Once again, you have eloquently written, and I love the visual of the poem. The photo as well is stunning.
    Hope you’re well sweetie.
    🙂
    p.s. I don’t know why, but I didn’t see this post in my Reader. Ugh.

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  18. 40something says:

    “Against the black night’s velvety vest.” Pure bliss!!! This absolute perfection, Reva. You painted us a masterpiece of words. I love the images your poem evokes! Ms Wordsmith, you!!! Blessings

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    • beingeternal says:

      I am always grateful for the splendid and beautiful appreciation you bestow on me and my poems, Kirsten. I cherish your wonderful encouragement. Thanks for the love and ever kind words. Happy @Ms Wordsmith.
      Thanks for the blessings.
      Take care and stay peaceful. 🙂

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  19. sheesh this is all kinds of gorgeousness.

    “Alike the exquisitely cut, fly-speck, lambent diamonds” – i feel light and hearty after reading this

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  20. I so love the perfect blending of the picture and your beautiful poem….thanks for sharing!

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you very much, Brown… for the wonderful appreciation. Such kindness from an amazing poet like you, means a lot to me. Thank you once again for your beautiful presence here.
      Stay Peaceful!
      Reva. 🙂

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  21. viktoryarch says:

    Wow, you have post the diamond poem.
    And it’s in a diamond shape… Cool.
    Amazing elegancy comes through the water droplets in the grass- a true diamonds provided by the Nature to enjoy the moment of precious drops.
    AMAZING….

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  22. Khushi says:

    Such beauty. This made my day 🙂

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  23. jk3mmys says:

    Just amazing!!! Love it!

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  24. Reva, this is brilliant! Your words are spectacular, so visual. My favorite line that creates a marvelous image is, “Against the black nights’ velvety vest”. Thank you for a stunning poem! Please enjoy the rest of the weekend!

    Warm wishes,
    Pepperanne

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you my dearest, Pepper. This is a splendid appreciation. I am all happiezzzz to read your lovely and kind words….it is very encouraging. Thank you for the warm wishes
      Have a fun-filled and peaceful Weekend!
      Love You. 🙂

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  25. Thank you for liking my post. I love this picture above and the poem. Blessings.

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  26. SirenaTales says:

    A triumph, Reva! Of form and content. As always, I admire your lush and vast diction (“ensconce!”, “lambent!”, “ineluctable!”–yummy) evoking the stunning beauties of light, movement and grace. Thank you. xoxo

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    • beingeternal says:

      Ahh….what a fantabulous appreciation..I am all humbled.
      Thank you so much my dear Chloe….your words are truly soothing. Diction is short of justifying the gracility in the luminosity. I just tried my level best.
      All happy that you like it.

      Stay Dancing!

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  27. WOW! This post is golden, R! Truly in words and the format – Oh my just fantastic! I can’t bring more words, I am so much in awe, Loved it, my friend! Brill! 🙂 ❤

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  28. WOW, this is the best post I have come accross since joining this wonderful community, love it, its gorgeous : )

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  29. JuJuwe says:

    Love Love Love… Just beautiful. Fits well between the words and my imagination. Take care, dear Reva, as always

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  30. deepbluesandseafoamgreens says:

    I absolutely love the way this poem is both written, and laid out. It’s brilliantly effective 🙂

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  31. The image, the language, the shape of the language, and the unity of image and language is
    gorgeous.

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  32. unbolt says:

    Wow! Perfectly penned and painted, Reva! ❤

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  33. Like all coins in chess goes inside the box after the play, so the dramatic dew transform and fly at the sight of the sun.

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you very much, Vinz. You have put it brilliantly accurate. True….the old play runs for a while and dies to reborn as a new play.

      Love your interpretation. Thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts.
      Stay Blessed! 🙂

      Like

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