The Swooning Scent!

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Swooning scent of the wettish earth;
Inflames the stubbed out wordsworth.
Dallying is the crisp iciness in the air;
Hankering for a warm shoulder to pair.
Freshening are the doting memories;
As the sweats of tomorrow softly freeze.
Blushing is the longtime drenched night;
Beneath the veil of silverish moon-light.
Lone soul minding to mellowed whisper;
which the perfumed raindrops author.
Moments, edging the heart’s feelings;
Winging my spirit to the starlit ceilings.


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77 comments on “The Swooning Scent!

  1. Do you have a poetry book in the making? If I wrote like this I would have several. The point of power is always in the moment not made up of excuses of doubt. Get on it!!!

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  2. Hi. Sir your mastery over poetry is awesome.
    a stringed Harp, played by a Master.
    Really great Blog.
    Brian

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    • beingeternal says:

      Ahh…. Thank you so much, Brian. I am no ‘sir’ no ‘master’. Just a simple girl. I am humbled to read your finest words. Thanks a zillion for lovesome appreciation. Glad to have your presence. Stay smiling! Reva 😊

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  3. Thank you for visiting my blog and liking one of my posts. Blessings, Natalie πŸ™‚

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  4. kirsten says:

    She’s back!!!! I’ve truly missed your writings. Each line is a complete entree in and of itself. you weave each line together as a unique course that when added to the next it becomes simply…delectable! 12 delectable courses to sate our appetites!! For this poem at least, I’m definitely coming back for more!!

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    • beingeternal says:

      I am just speechless kirsten….I guess i do not deserve such generous appreciation and warm welcome. I never received this much “unasked” love in my life.
      I am at dire loss of words.Your sentiment on my sappy slight poem is more poetic than the poem itself. Hats off to you. I am just scrooching in humbleness before you, my dear.

      Much love and hugs to you. πŸ™‚

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      • kirsten says:

        You deserve every bit of appreciation and welcome you got for this poem!! You are a truly gifted writer my friend and many people missed you while you were gone, as you can see from our comments!!
        You are loved! Blessings

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        • beingeternal says:

          You are just awesome my Kirsten. You make me feel very much comfortable in every way….that is really an art. Yes..many have missed me and some have even mailed me on my personal ID. And each mail made me cry and prompted me to be here again.
          Many thanks fro the sweet reminder and blessings.

          Stay Happy! πŸ™‚

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  5. Your words like fresh beautiful flowers make one to swoon! A very lovely poem!

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  6. Hello…So, I have no idea what to say.
    I am new to blogging…and my god, if it isn’t overwhelming!!
    I got a like on my post from you and I came here to thank you for that.
    But now…after reading your poems, thank you seems too…umm…vain somehow.
    You are an amazing writer, poetess…the placement of words and the flow is simply inexplicable!
    Your compositions are so much better than mine. So, the fact that you even read my poem and liked it felt like an achievement and I thought to myself, “hey…I must have written something right!”
    Thank you for reading my poem. πŸ™‚
    You have my sincerest and warmest regards. πŸ™‚

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    • beingeternal says:

      Dear friend…even I am short of words reading your beautiful comment. It just made my day. There was a hard time when I was just a kid on blogosphere….complete stranger and completely immature..knowing not any ABC of being here… I still remember how i was glued to my laptop for hours and days together just to find a twinkling single star on my blog.
      But someone did like it and that was the moment i felt like writing more. I just passed on what I received….thats it.
      But let me tell you the truth…Though you are new to blogging..your writings are much more experienced ones.
      Its my pleasure to have you here on my blog…and I humbly welcome you.
      Your writings are amazing friend and are worth reading. Cheers!

      Thank you once again for your warmest regards.
      Stay Peaceful…..smiles on.
      Reva πŸ™‚

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  7. glad to have you back comrade, and a heeellooooo to your gossamer silken verses too. have a great year, you two πŸ™‚

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  8. You’re back! And with a bang!
    Happy new year, R! ❀
    Hope you're doing well!

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  9. stacilys says:

    There she is. And in all her glory. You took a break, but you’ve come back with a punch Reva. Beautiful poem, sweetie. I like how you emphasized the noticing of moments.
    Big hugs to you.
    πŸ™‚ ❀

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  10. Amazing thoughts output…! πŸ™‚

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  11. Nishita13 says:

    Hello there,
    I am here to inform you that you have been nominated for an award.
    May you smile louder. πŸ™‚
    Cheers to you !
    http://walkingtomydreams13.wordpress.com/2015/01/10/i-am-my-name/

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  12. Genie says:

    Gorgeous poem, Angel.

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you so much my Genie. Smiles on……as ever. πŸ™‚

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      • Genie says:

        Will do, Angel, I am curious what your next instructions will be, however, the ones you have given me are just right for now and until your next wise council. πŸ™‚

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        • beingeternal says:

          Genie is ever curious becoz she has to hunt a creative way to bring the lost smiles back. My smart Genie is not at the mercy of any command from any Angel….she knows perfectly what to follow next. Angel’s commands are mere formalities.
          You are well aware of this. πŸ™‚

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          • Genie says:

            Haha! No, I’m not aware of this, I need your instructions, seriously, the silly Genie gets caught up in dramas with men and needs your Angel instructions to Stay Shiny, etc. πŸ™‚

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            • beingeternal says:

              Yes…Genie can get caught up only in dramas and not in real life. You are aware of where you are caught….and only an ignorant needs council…… not the well aware Genie. When it is wrong…you know it.
              I can only tell you to shine bright even under the eclipse but devoid of protecting you from the eclipse…..Wish I had the power to stop it from eclipsing the shine.

              Still….Shine more brightly penetrating all that in your way. πŸ™‚

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              • Genie says:

                Angel, I need council about full moons, I get so intoxicated by full moons, however, my relationship with the man I am involved with ends in a monthly split up on the full moon! Sounds funny, but believe me, it’s not and I am in dire need of council! Why, I don’t know, I am laughing at my most serious question. btw, we are still split up frm this last full moon, so I also need instructions on how to mend things after a full moon, with my most wild man.

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                • beingeternal says:

                  There is nothing in this world that can dare to go against your heart’s prayer except your own self doubt. It is not crazy because I myself experienced this phenomena. I go lunatic sometimes for no reason on Full moons….I partly connect this with me being a cancerian..as I am a july born and immensely ruled by moon…a sensitive soul you see. Hence ebbs and tides.

                  Sincere prayer is the only solution as of now. It is not that you split up on the fullmoon…its because yu go over emotional and over sentimental and behave as a lunatic hence the dramas on this day. Do not blame yourself or harbor any guilt. forgive yourself for being so. Woman shares certain moonly attributes which men cannot understand.

                  BTW whats your zodiac sign?

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                  • Genie says:

                    I’m a little lamb, that turns into a fun loving ram on full moons!
                    It’s true, men don’t understand full moons and women’s emotional reactions we’re having on the full moon and during our moon. I think you know what I mean by having our moon, don’t like the other term for tha time of month.

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                    • beingeternal says:

                      I fully understand Genie. Certain things are under our control and others things are out of our control. Instead of wasting head on uncontrollable ones….why not control our own emotions…we cannot avoid them fully but atleast we can keep a check on them.

                      Accidents cannot be avoided fully but one can save oneself by practising caution. I instruct you to shunt all your emotional energy on fullmoons towards the poetic you….Keep yourself occupied with writing more on this day. All our emotions good or bad are our own energies so invest them wisely or convert them. This is the key.

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                    • Genie says:

                      I love your divine instructions! and will carry them out from this day on, Angel.
                      Thanks a million and one.

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                    • beingeternal says:

                      My Pleasure sweetie. Thanks to you for being so kind and loving Genie…. Take it as a challenge this time and make yourself win over that thing.
                      Lets shield ourselves instead of avoiding others.

                      Stay Positive and Peaceful!

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  13. Welcome back!!! I (certainly the least of all your followers) have missed your voice.

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    • beingeternal says:

      Thank you dear for such a warm welcome. More than anything I have immensely missed the unconditional love, care, beautiful appreciation and encouragement which all of my blogger friends have bestowed on me ….so liberally.

      I am greatly indebted to you all. Hope you are doing all well.
      Stay blessed and stay grand! πŸ™‚
      Reva πŸ™‚

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  14. Ms. Vee says:

    Hello, thank you for visiting, and the like on my post. You blog is awesome, fantastic writings! Have a blessed day, and peace to you. πŸ™‚

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  15. This is so beautiful!

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  16. “Moments, edging the heart’s feelings;
    Winging my spirit to the starlit ceilings.”

    marvelous my friend!! great work πŸ™‚
    stay blessed and happy πŸ™‚

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  17. unbolt says:

    Wow… Reva! It’s beautiful!
    I’m happy that you and your amazing poems came back on WP! ❀

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