Bleached out are all my witless vanities in a blink;
Repose, I wordlessly in the moth-eaten coffin and think.
Echoing her name from the elite memories, I have;
Pine I, the balmy touch and warmth of aroha she gave.
Oh asterisks! Bedim your glint, for eyes gestates my soulful moon;
Hither descends the angel of mine, aah…my life’s paragon boon.
Autumns she, as the maiden ray of sun and departs as the last rain;
Bequeathing my desolate heart unquenchable, all panting in pain.
Robs she, the bereft and sterile soil from my rusted grave;
Aflame in the acerbic quagmire of aloneness, and aggrieve.
Spited she, kneels in orisons and hollow handed, walks off;
Finding operose, the bracing stores of intimacy, to throw off.
Oh God, stream your grace, afford me a lone breath of life;
Know you not, knots of love are insubordinate to Death’s knife?
Engrossed in the absolute foolery of winning life’s bootless race;
Treasured salty pelts on her sugared cheeks, I forgot to erase.
GIF Courtesy: Tumblr.
The imagery translates beautifully into persian.
I enjoyed reliving the poem a second time in Rumi’s tongue!
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Thank you so much Ghader. I am elated to read your immensely treasured words. Happy to know that you enjoyed it….that means a lot to me. I love Rumi’s peerless poetic wisdom and I try my best to carry that blissful essence in few of my poems.
Hope you are having a blissful time. Stay Blessed!
Reva. 🙂
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Amazing images and words, Reva. Brava. xo
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Thank you very much. Your appreciation is always treasured. Stay beautiful! 🙂
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Reva, this is beautifully poignant. It reminds me well why I dread certain phone calls…”desolate heart unquenchable”.
Blessings ~ Wendy ❀
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Sad, but that is the reality of life. Thank you very much, Wendy. Stay beautiful! 🙂
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Such elegant words, I am learning new emotion through the words written. Beautiful, Reva. Very deep sadness. I love
Autumns she, as the maiden ray of sun and departs as the last rain;
The energy of the sun and the moody of the rain, of hope and lost
i know I know , should consider the whole poem but still this caught me☺
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Thank you, Julia. I am glad you love the sadness in my poem. Rightly said…. the hope of sun and loss of rain…………….that is life. You got it right.
I am happy to know your view on the poem . Thanks for the appreciation. Stay smiling. 🙂
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Wow, Reva. I have to read over this one again and dissect it, maybe two or three times. It rings as very deep and sad. Poetry definitely touches to the core of the emotions.
🙂
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Aww Staci………….so wonderful of you. So sad you had to read it thrice and feel the sadness three times.. 😦 . Yes, poetry is such a thing even the broken seems beautiful.
But glad you like it. The sadness is gone now and the smile is back, right on my lips. Stay wonderful!
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Oh, I’m so glad the smile is back. What happy news.
🙂 ❤
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Even my smile is back seeing you smiling. 🙂
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Awwwww, you always bless me Reva.
🙂 Another one just for you sweetie.
🙂 or two.
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Another blessing just for you my dearest. Oops………where is the blessing? Here it is….May you stay ageless in spirit always. Prayers Assured. 🙂
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Big smile.
🙂
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It’s so beautiful, Reva! It’s perfect…
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Thank you so much Tia……… I am glad you think so. Love Love Love to you. 🙂
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All emotions you display in this poem,
Love, betray, pleading and bleeding through the page.
Chasing away the bad omen.
Rip, fight and be free from the cage.
PS. Mighty emotions you stirred in your poem. Well done.
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Thank You, VIk. Your appreciation and fillip means a lot to me. Yes………….its a cocktail of many emotions. Stay Blessed! 🙂
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Your encouragement does the same to me.
Best wishes.
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Feeling happy for someone and myself. too. Thank you for the wishes. Stay smiling! 🙂
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I will.
🙂 🙂
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Though a bit difficult for me to understand… But loved the sadness in it ( I am not a sadist 😉 ), Jokes apart, U write amazing. Keep expressing 🙂
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Awwww so nice of you. I am sorry for the difficult tone of my expression. 😦
Thank you very much for the encouragement. Stay Wonderful!
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Wow! I’ll be honest – I love sad poetry, I really do and that’s why most of my poems are the same – hopefulness comes to me but very rarely.
“Oh asterisks! Bedim your glint, for eyes gestates my soulful moon;
Hither descends the angel of mine, aah…my life’s paragon boon.”
Whoa! Splendid, and you vocabulary is just…what can I say, I don’t have the words – it’s unbelievably good, I always have to google a few because mine is..hehe let’s just say limited. 😀
Great work, R! Beautiful! ❤
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Big warm hug to you for liking and loving my sad poem D!. For the first time, even I loved it immensely after posting. I had to get into the character and I did…. It was really painful. I love poems of hope but to experience that hope, I have to walk on the grimmest path of brokenness. You see no hope without loss.
Now stop upgrading my thing and degrading your thing. We are full to PhDs in our own domains. That is why we are connected. 🙂
Honestly, whoever has liked or loved this poem so far,,,,my bond with them has grown lil stronger now. Because, good or bad, I am in love with this poem of mine.
Love you darling! Stay shining. 🙂
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Woah! that’s one heavy poem, the words carry so much weight 🙂
Oh God, stream your grace, afford me a lone breath of life;
Know you not, knots of love are insubordinate to Death’s knife?
Loved these lines….
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Thank you ever so much, Akhiz. You are too kind and the appreciation is damn generous. I am really glad to know your specific inclination and thank you for letting me know that. Stay wonderful and blessed! 🙂
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The last line is georgeous… I love the vocabulary you used in this poem!
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Thank you so much for liking it. Stay Wonderful! 🙂
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