Turquoise Sea and Blanched She.


Springs she, at the edge of sienna sand;
By the iciness of turquoise drunk sea.
Subsisting her verity, bosoming her bliss;
Tantalizing her kismet, careen to her tune.

Springs she, in her honed brokenness;
Becomingly torn and graciously spirited.
Sensing too alive in the fleeting moments;
Ardently in passion with her solitary life.

Springs she and her soul, profoundly merged-
Hand clapping euphorically, hollering aloud.
As bluey curls show up in the incommoded sea;
Tones of emotions paints the blanched SHE.

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18 comments on “Turquoise Sea and Blanched She.

  1. Beautifully chiseled in word art. Wow!

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  2. kirsten says:

    For some reason, I picture her by the sea flowing on the currents of the wind. Kind of like when you put your hand out the window of a car and let it curve up and down cupping the wind. I love the sense of free spiritedness (is that a word?) invoked by your words and phrasing combinations. And “honed brokeness” – amazing

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    • beingeternal says:

      Wow….that is so amazing of you Kirsten. Yes..I love being free ..and I love that free spiritedness. I guess…every one longs for it. I am just re-reading whatever you have described so beautifully. You have invoked many other beautiful feelings here in your words….
      I feel even “being broken” is an art…the art which only a broken spirit can understand.
      Thank you for all the understanding.


      • kirsten says:

        I do believe that when one’s spirit has experienced brokeness a deep compassions dwells in the heart for others who have been broken. Many learn to survive in their brokeness with the hope that they will be healed one day. For me it was that shimmer of hope that kept me going through the seasons of barren darkness. My healing has been a long process, but i wouldnt change a thing!! My prayer is that others will experience the same freedom!! Blessings

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        • beingeternal says:

          So true! Compassion is what lives in you when everything is broken and nothing stays in you. You are very kind and thoughtful dear. You have so much love for others.
          I pray you always be happy and healthy. Much love and hugs to you.
          Take much care.
          Zillion thanks for the prayers from your beautiful heart.
          Love you. 🙂


  3. mspahr says:

    Everything was gorgeous about this.

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  4. Aquileana says:

    Beautifully penned… It really stands out!. Best wishes, Aquileana 😀

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  5. Akhiz says:

    you always post amazing images that suit so perfectly with your poems, this is brilliant 🙂

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  6. “turquoise drunk sea” sounds perfect.

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