“Fumbling in the blackest spaces of the intimate emptiness, worries at bay and hopes to stay, she swayed to the melodic rhythm of her soul. Winnowing out pride and embracing love in her stride; croaking beyond the game of shame and blame, she swam the banks of her emotional river. Trampling through and through the murkiest layers of grief and strife she acknowledged her soul dearest. She drenched, drowned and lost herself into the unfathomable profundities of her eternal self. Feeling and freeing limitless, she remained with an innocent fed heart. She rehearsed the “weep of retreat” at the ultimate hark back to her soul. She buried the prosaic rituals of mere living and was adrift on the clear waters of everlasting existence – a pristine pearl in the shell exuding her innate essence. Raising calm in her own presence, she reassembled her fragmentary self. In these unparalled moments of divine silence, she sank in her true self….where thoughts died and feelings lived.”
Wow.. Beautiful Reva..!!! 🙂
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Thank you very much Samjoth for your beautiful words. Hope you are doing well. Sorry…I was on a long break so culdnt check any of your recent works. Would check as time permits.
Stay Grand! 🙂
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Oh I have been busy too, and not much of any writings..!!
Hope you are doing great..!! 🙂
Stay happy..!!
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Yes..I am doing all well. Thank you.
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Yes!
Energy without boundaries or limitations….not hampered or constrained by words.
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Brilliantly said! Thank you every so much for commenting, Mary. Stay wonderful and blessed. 🙂 Reva.
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A beautiful way of putting words together to form a whole, quite a master of words you are.1/3 of them I had to go out for the dictionary and look them up.
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Thank you for your generous appreciation. I am no master of words. Emotions make you master them when you really have an urge to express your suppressed feelings. I am sorry for your effort looking them up in the dictionary. 🙂
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Gorgeous x
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Thank you for your kind appreciation. 🙂
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You are able to string together words in such a beautiful way. Really reaching the emotions. Almost like a dance. I enjoyed the final thought as well as the commenter above. A place of silence 🙂
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Thank you for your generous appreciation. I will treasure it. 🙂
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So sad thoughts like the loss of being an eternal Ophelia.. prose written as poetry..
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Very profoundly strung words.
Like the sadness and depth of the post,
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Thank you for getting the concept, words weaved.
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Hi. Thanks for stopping by and liking my blog.
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My Pleasure 🙂
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Your words…Oh so perfect ! Beautiful writing my friend, the ending thought is just awesome.
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Gratitude my dear. I appreciate even one word of mine touched you in happiness. 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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I think the right word for this is ‘Intense’ ! I love how the words flowed and the rhythm defines awesomeness!
Lovely 🙂 (Y)
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Thank you very much dear. It is an elated feeling a writer has when a poet comments on the prose. 🙂
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